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Why going to Hawaii is better than going to London
Going to Hawaii is better than going to London for many reasons. First of all, Hawaii is a lot cheaper than London. In London, the currency is pounds, and pounds are almost twice as much as a Canadian dollar. In Hawaii, the currency is the American dollar which is very similar to the Canadian dollar. Secondly, Hawaii has more of a preferable climate. In Hawaii it is sunny most almost all of the time, and the temperature is a lot more agreeable. It is not too hot or cold. However in London, it's quite rainy everyday and the weather is damp and chilly. Finally, Hawaii is a lot more relaxing than London. In London, it is busy and it is hard to kick back and relax. You have to take the crowded Metro everywhere to do something interesting. In Hawaii, you can lay on the warm breezy beach while sipping lemonade and watch the beautiful calming ocean. That's why Hawaii is better than London.